Sorry for the very late feedback for the new version.
It's been one crazy week here.
With asian games coming up, the government trying to reduce traffic jam by implement 'even' and 'odd' license plate that can and may enter certain streets.
- I've take a look at the new version, great addition with the difficulty selection screen.
- I notice there are slightly change with the terrain, but still retain the doodads from earlier map. Nice touch with adding rain emiter btw! Loving the feel of the campaign even more.
- I also notice you remove the "" on the conversation, good call imo.
Overall, I feel that this is a definite improvement from the previous version.
In reply to WingedArchon:
So sad to see fellow map makers shelfed their project.
I surely hope you will pick it up again, at your time and pace.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Those are sweet looking terrain.
Autonomous sword ? Cool.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Ohhh, cool. Wonder what those changes are.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Hello there WingedArchon, how are you.
In case you missed it, I've emailed you about the Time Splitters and Noir : Ascension crossover.
Do let me know what you think.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Cool mission launcher.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
The Vaporizer model is so cool.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Alright, cci page has been updated.
Adding you and your project.
Conratz!
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
In reply to WingedArchon:
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Hello there WingedArchon, how are you.
This is a bit late, but since you are a map maker now, how would you like to join the custom campaign initiative ?
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
In reply to WingedArchon:
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Hello there WingedArchon, how are you.
Sorry for the very late feedback for the new version.
It's been one crazy week here.
With asian games coming up, the government trying to reduce traffic jam by implement 'even' and 'odd' license plate that can and may enter certain streets.
- I've take a look at the new version, great addition with the difficulty selection screen.
- I notice there are slightly change with the terrain, but still retain the doodads from earlier map. Nice touch with adding rain emiter btw! Loving the feel of the campaign even more.
- I also notice you remove the "" on the conversation, good call imo.
Overall, I feel that this is a definite improvement from the previous version.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Hello there,
Well, I've play your 1st map.
Considering that this is your 1st map, I dare say that you actually did very well.
As for feedbacks,
1. Loading Screen
Nice touch with the custom loading screen, give the player some idea of what to be expected from the map.
2. Terrain
For 1st time map maker, those are actually good terraining.
But perhaps you might want to consider adding more trees or rocks. Feel very barren in some areas.
And also, perhaps add weather FX such as rain or fog in certain area to give more immerse feeling for the environment.
3. Units
Custom units ! I've seen most of them in your project page, but seems you add more for this campaign.
The Vindicator got to be my favorite of them.
Also nice touch with adding custom portraits for the units. Give unique feel to the Faction.
Specially like the custom adept portrait.
4. Difficulty
Hmmm ..., I dare not say, since what considered easy for some could be consider difficult for others.
But FYI, I only need to load once during Disruptor boss fight.
5. Story and Cinematic
Nice work on the cameras ! Good angle, and nice pacing.
But .. perhaps you want to consider smother transition between gameplay and cinematic?
Also perhaps remove the "" from the conversation / dialogue ?
The story of with a good start, I am certainly intrique to find out more about what
"Oblivion have in store for The Cybers ."
Hope to see more Time Splitters in the Future.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice
Hey nice! Conratz on finishing the first Map.
My projects : The Hammer of Dawn, Noir : Automata, Noir : Evolution, Noir : Ascension, Hammer of Dawn Revamp
Many awesome projects : Custom Campaign Initiative
Something for the community : A Small Letter of Thanks, SC2mapster Classic Skin - Alevice