Glad to see you are reading feedback you get. What I meant by it is kind of hard for new players, was that you had a lot of helpful text showing what to do. There was just so much of it at once, there was no way I could read it all very quickly. Idk if I said that correctly, but I tried. Anyway, whatever you added probably will help. Good luck!
Is this public? I might try it out sometime. It looks like you put a lot of work into this. It looks fun, but I think there's already another map that is going to upstage you. Honestly, this actually does look pretty entertaining. I think I'm going to check it out later whenever I get around to testing my own map. You should check this out for inspiration maybe. It is a group of people who I'd say are really good at using the sc2 editor. Their work just seems really polished and great looking. It isn't released yet, but from the screenshots, it looks really good.