Are those custom meshes you made? They look pretty decent. The grass in the bottom left of the second screenshot seems to cut off and not really fade into anything. It sort of breaks the scene a bit imo. Else they look quite solid.
The audio piece has some clipping on some words, namely on the "N" of "Nyera", that is quite noticeable. This can be doctored out in some cases, and in some cases filtered out with effects like Audition's "Remove Popping/Clicks" which has yielded some good results for me in the past. Additionally, the audio for the voice sounds a bit flat. You could perhaps use an equalizer to restore a bit of upper fidelity to it.
I personally would avoid camera shaking as much as possible as I find it extremely irritating, but that's just me.
Keep it up!
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Are those custom meshes you made? They look pretty decent. The grass in the bottom left of the second screenshot seems to cut off and not really fade into anything. It sort of breaks the scene a bit imo. Else they look quite solid.
The audio piece has some clipping on some words, namely on the "N" of "Nyera", that is quite noticeable. This can be doctored out in some cases, and in some cases filtered out with effects like Audition's "Remove Popping/Clicks" which has yielded some good results for me in the past. Additionally, the audio for the voice sounds a bit flat. You could perhaps use an equalizer to restore a bit of upper fidelity to it.
I personally would avoid camera shaking as much as possible as I find it extremely irritating, but that's just me.
Keep it up!