Generally, I like it, a lot of potential, though, if I were you, I would kill for some voice acting (eventually, that's the last thing you should worry about) for video logs. That'd be sweet.
The camera annoyed me a lot though, you need a greater angle because freakin Isaac takes up HALF THE SCREEN. I spent a lot of time just running in circles too... ya need a minimap. But you aren't using the UI (and you can't remove the minimap) so I would suggest you create a dialog box with an image of the minimap (or an artist-created image minimap) and use a dynamically updated dot to show player position. That'd be huge.
Lastly and this is pretty tough, dead space was awesome due to its amazing sound editing. If you really want a creepy atmosphere, you'll want to try and emulate that. Which is a ton of work; really you need a dedicated sound man. But still something to keep in mind down the line, if you get really srs.
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Generally, I like it, a lot of potential, though, if I were you, I would kill for some voice acting (eventually, that's the last thing you should worry about) for video logs. That'd be sweet.
The camera annoyed me a lot though, you need a greater angle because freakin Isaac takes up HALF THE SCREEN. I spent a lot of time just running in circles too... ya need a minimap. But you aren't using the UI (and you can't remove the minimap) so I would suggest you create a dialog box with an image of the minimap (or an artist-created image minimap) and use a dynamically updated dot to show player position. That'd be huge.
Lastly and this is pretty tough, dead space was awesome due to its amazing sound editing. If you really want a creepy atmosphere, you'll want to try and emulate that. Which is a ton of work; really you need a dedicated sound man. But still something to keep in mind down the line, if you get really srs.
I look forward to playing the next episode!
Cheers!,
Xen.