My reocmmendation for filenaming would be like

CampaignShortName<Number>

Example:

Convergence01 Convergence02 etc

Also, I recommend you to create a forum thread on the Map Feedback section. You will get more attentiont there.

Unrelated, I recommend you to read this post: http://www.sc2mapster.com/forums/resources/tutorials/62258-campaign-tutorial/#p9

Okay, so here are my thoughts of the top of my head.

Mission 1

• Abathur looking at the camera while the overmind talks to it is great.
• Im not sure I like that Abathur is voiced while the Overmind isnt. I think its preferable that neither is voiced.
• This might get explained later, but I would like to know if the Oracle is the narrator or is actually talking with someone.
• I havent looked at the triggers much, but I am not quite clear what is the actual victory condition on the first mission. The rocks seemed more like secondary objectives rather than part of the primary objective. It feels like I randomly won. Just set a more straightforward objective: "Survive the onslaught for 30 minutes while the overmind sends abathur somewhere else"; "Hold the terran forces until the Protoss Fleet arrives"; either of those or whatever you can come up with will help a lot knowing what the player has to do.
• I like the idea of this alternate timeline. You dont have to, but it would be desirable to know what caused this time convergence. Maybe a small mistery dialogue where two unseen people discuss what they did to change it.
• Grammar is not perfect, but its much better than you are giving yourself credit for. Im still willing to help you fixing it if you want. Drop me a PM.
• I like the idea of zooming out the camera, but my computer doesnt handle it well, so I will have to argue against it for the sake of performance and readability (purplish zerg on purplish creep is hard to read).
• I honestly like how you laid out the irrgeular mineral fields. Some will argue against it, but I like it and suggest to keep it.
• You should place minimap markers on where the rocks are tho. It takes a reaaaaally long time to find them. Maybe put an in-game reticle display too.
• I would also suggest that the waves are announced by an admiral or whatever, and adress what the actual attacks will do. Maybe something like when the siege tanks will show up, have this line "Admiral: Attention artillery squad, attack the Zerg defenses from the west!". Something like that.
• Consider using the CharEx2 tileset. It looks sexier.

Mission 2

• The first cinematic looks good, and they seem genuinely amusing.
• I like the intent behind the over the shoulder camera, and it works well for the first part of the mission. For the second part, it doesnt work at all IMO.
• Please show how many Primal Mothers or whatever they are called you have to kill. Like "Erradicate the infestation (0/3 Big Monsters killed)"
• The first part plays well and is very straightforward overall. I think the second part needs a lot of fixing tho. I like the idea behind your objectives, but the Coolant Towers are placed all over the place without any rhyme or reason. It took me many tries dealing with the Warhound/Aegis Guard/SCV group dealing papercut damage until I killed them all (after many repairing trips), and then I learned that another coolant tower area had them instal killed if I wanted, which could have saved me the pain. I think you should consider tiering tower placement and hint that there might be other means to dispose of harder camps.
• I think the main problem is that the map becomes too open and you can find many things more by accident than by intent. I obliterated the second terran base with the primal zerg without any info that what i did would have worked for that.
• I recommend capping the total primal zerg spawned per cavern. There was a point where there were hundreds of them, killing my performance.
• I would also suggest using different player colors for the primal zerg and the enemy terran, even those allied with them.
• The repair trips are fun for the first part of the map, but it becomes a chore for the second. I would recommend that you give JB an ability to repair itself on cooldown, similar to artanis healing spell, at least for the second part, under the excuse that the twins mounted a new tech on JBs viking.
• I would also recommend adding more cooldown based abilities to JB, maybe some grenade, shield or whatever you like, if only to make a single character commando mission more interesting.
• I still havent finished it for reasons, I will give you more thoughts once I finish it.

Overall its a good start, the premise shows promise, the characters are enjoyable, but it still needs some work here and there. If you get to address some of those issues this could become a great camapign. Keep up the good work!

@VastanX: Go

Its because you have a Curse subscription. Nothing to worry about.

I have played the first two maps and I will give some thoughts later tomorrow.