As o3210 said, it's a good cinematic and nothing more.
The problem here is that you used a slow moving static camera, focused on a slow moving character, which breaks the sense of chaos that the background portraits. You can't combine slow and fast like that, it just doesn't work.
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As o3210 said, it's a good cinematic and nothing more.
The problem here is that you used a slow moving static camera, focused on a slow moving character, which breaks the sense of chaos that the background portraits. You can't combine slow and fast like that, it just doesn't work.