Nice model and concept, looks like a blizz-made merc version of the SCV. Is that one backpad clipping through the right shoulder or is that just the perspective? Apart from that it looks great.
It's lore also seems to be fleshed out very well, although I'm a little confused by one thing: You first stated that the PTV is made as a more peace-fitted version of the SCV, but in the last part you declare it to be more combat suited. Is the PTV now a better option in general combat than the SCV? Or just in specific situations?
Wow. Definitely one of the if not the best cinematic I've seen. Love those custom models, writing was very good, there was great action, characters had distinct personalities, even the dominion was on spot. The only problem I had was that some of the dialog lines were played too fast. But apart from that you did a great job. If your campaign only has half of the quality of this cinematic then it will be among the best ones on mapster.