Drastic amounts of noise removal.
If you dont have alot of expensive equipment there is things you can do to still get a clean audio sound. The hiss and static of either your mic or your recording environment is awful.
If you want to get rid of the low quality sound because youre ambient sounds are echoing in your recording. Record your audio under a heavy blanket or into a box lined with soft foam padding. The idea is to have a reflection filter. You can even record in a closet with alot of clothes.
Less words (I'm ready when you are -> Ready when you are)
More excitement needed too, Sounds boring.