Sorry guys, but I am pulling out from the RP due to new RL commitments coming up and I probably won't have time to do this or even mapping...
I'll pass control of my character over to Vjetar since he's in charge of the Protoss.
Sounds interesting, let me give it a go. Kinda long post. If its too long, I can shorten it, I think..
Opheilm, Master of Shadows
**
Faction = Erana's Order
Unit Type = Dark Templar**
Background - Pre Brood War
Opheilm is one of the young Dark Templars that was with Zeratul when the latter first met with Tassadar. Initially not trusting the Khalai Protoss, Opheilm was against Zeratul aiding Tassadar as he carries a huge resentment against the Conclave. After witnessing Tassadar's devotion to the future of the Protoss, and his views about both light and dark, Opheilm gradually grew to respect Tassadar as a great leader and as someone who is able to bring the gap between the 2 sides. However, this all changed when Aldaris made the announcement that Tassadar was a traitor and has no longer any say in the Conclave.
Resentment against the Conclave began to fill Opheilm again as he believes that the Conclave were stuck on old ideals that will just lead to their downfall. Regardless, he still greatly respects Tassadar as an individual and continues to serve him. His experiences with Tassadar, Raynor and Fenix has convinced him that both of their races can work together for the greater good.
However, everything changed for him when during the final battle of the overmind, whereby, Tassadar sacrificed himself to destroy the overmind. Not understanding fully why Tassadar would willingly sacrifice himself for these foolish Protoss, Opheilm's resentment for the Conslave grew into hatred as he believes that it shouldn't have been Tassadar that died that day.
Background - Brood War
While aiding the Protoss in the escape to Shakuras, before the Warp Gate was shut down, Opheilm was knocked unconscious by the Zerg, not before managing to kill his attacker. When he woke up, he found himself at Shakuras, battered and injured. While the Dark Templar and protoss refugees were assaulting the Zerg on Shakuras, Opheilm chose to run away from it all. Disillusioned and weary from conflict, he boarded his shuttle and went into cold sleep, drifting into the sea of stars...
Unknown to him, while drifting aimlessly, his shuttle has been sucked into a random wormhole that connects the Koprulu sector to the Eurim sector. Opheilm just continued to be in cold sleep, as though this is what he wants.
Centuries after WoL
The shuttle continued drifting until it was too close to the Planet Khasan and was sucked into it due to its gravitional pull and in part, the poor maintenance of the shuttle. This woke Opheilm up from his slumber. Realizing that he was surrounded by a megalopolis of Protoss settlements, he went ahead and made contact with them, and since he was a Dark Templar, he was given a scouting position in the army. He soon came to understand that The Ancestral Imperium of Protoss is exactly the same as the Protoss Conclave led by the Khalai. This brought back up painful memories and once again, stirred up ambivalent feelings of hatred and loss within him.
It was then he met the Praetor Erana whom reminded him very much of Tassadar. It was through Erana that he managed to find a source of peace in this sector hostile to him just because of his caste. He found Erana's views of racial segregation and the Dark Templar to be very similiar to Tassadar and vowed his alligence to Erana - the same way that Zeratul had once sworn to help Tassadar. Since then, Opheilm has been acting as a slient guardian to Erana, overseeing everything that goes around Erana.
Not too long later, the Zerg invaded and Opheilm proved himself as a Master scout during the war, the battles and experiences that he faced during his time at the Koprulu sector gave him much exposure to the Zerg and their tactics. His timely and accurate reports saved the lives of countless of Protoss and even at times, allowed them to turn the tide of battle, earning him the nickname "Shadow"
Despite his efforts, the overwhelming concentrated numbers of the Zerg still proved to be too formidable against the divided unity of the Protoss. It was then that Praetor Erana managed to get all the different tribes of Protoss and even the Terrans to work together against their common enemy. This brought back memories of the alliance between Zeratul, Tassadar and Raynor. In Praetor Erana, Opheilm saw Tassadar. He envisioned himself as Zeratul and the Terran as Raynor's Raiders. Except that this time, "Tassadar" didn't die after the war.
After the Battle Of Arken
Despite being a Dark Templar, Opheilm was given the rank of Praetor after the war for his heroic exploits. However, on the day where he was awarded Praetor, The Imperium arrested Erana and stripped the rank of Praetor away from Erana. It dawned on him that he was awarded Praetor to fill in the gap in the conclave that Erana once held.
Opheilm realized that being a Praetor, he would have a say regarding racial segregation and other conservative laws that the regime has and he would be able to carry on Erana's views, but he may very well lose a close friend whom he sworn to protect. Against his better judgement, he chose to stay on as a Praetor. Despite being made Praetor and openly voicing out his views, the Imperium's disdain and ostracize against Dark Templar and the Nerazim hasn't changed and slowly, he became disillusioned again. It was at this time he thought of what Zeratul would have done, and he fell to his knees in remorse and mortification.
Erana's Order
During this time, he left his Praetor position and joined Erana's Order, for a chance of redemption. There, he found the solace that he needed and has always dreamed of. There wasn't any Racial Segregation, both light and dark fought for the same cause. Although he initial faced some disapproval from members as he chose to become a Praetor instead of rescuing Erana that day, his abilities and judgement has earned the respect of everyone in the order. His sole motivation for going on now is Erana, whom he sees as a figure of Tassadar. He has since taken on a new oath, and vowed Erana will not die while he is still holds breath.
Personality
Opheilm likes to work alone or work with a selected few people that he trusts. Years of resentment and hatred has taken a toll on his mental state, leading him to be cynical towards others. Although it takes long to earn Opheilm's trust, once its earned, it will not be broken easily. After the events of Tassadar, He disdains taking away the life of both Protoss and Terran, as he has witnessed the mutual cooperation between both sides, however that does not go for Zerg. He fights the Zerg with a fevour unlike any other, and will stop at nothing to kill these abominations.
Blink -
Energy - Nil,
Cooldown: 10 seconds
Studying from his mentor, Zeratul, Opheilm is able to mimic his blink ability to 100% efficiency.
Twilight -
Energy - 0.9 per second
Advanced cloaking techniques enable Opheilm to move around without the "cloak blimp" being seen at the map
Expel -
Energy - 75
Using Psionic techinques, Opheilm is able to push a group of units back to range 6 from Opheilm. This ability shoots out as an AoE cone that extends from Opheilm Massive units are not affected. Cannot affect structures, but air units are effected. No damage is dealt.
Surreal Hallucination -
Energy - 50 (Per Illusion)\
Picking up a few tricks from Tassadar, Opheilm is able to create 1 hallucination of himself instantly. These hallucinations differ in the fact that they possesses the same intelligence and will as Opheilm and lasts twice as longer. These hallucinations are used as more of a messenger then to actually distract enemies
Assassinate -
Energy - 100
Every Dark Templar is trained in the art of assassination. Opheilm is no different. Deals 225(+75 to massive) damage to a single target at melee range. However, Opheilm must not be revealed by any detectors while using this skill.
Heaven's Web
Energy - 75
Cooldown: 10 seconds
Using the technology from the corsairs, Amagumo is able to launch a disruption web which disables structure type units from attacking for 20 seconds. Radius of 3. Range of 9 (MTs have range 8 when upgraded)
Supersonic
Energy - 25
Cooldown: 30 Seconds
Charges : 5
Turns all thrusters of Amagumo to 150% power. Dashes the Amagumo for 10 Range in the timeframe of 1 second. However, this ability has 5 charges in which 1 will be used each time. Replenishing of charges can only be done either through repairs, or by docking at a stargate.
Sorry guys, but I am pulling out from the RP due to new RL commitments coming up and I probably won't have time to do this or even mapping...
I'll pass control of my character over to Vjetar since he's in charge of the Protoss.
Have fun with the RP.
I have updated my characters accordingly, please review them again.
btw, is mine ok or is there anything that I would need to change?
Sounds interesting, let me give it a go. Kinda long post. If its too long, I can shorten it, I think..
Opheilm, Master of Shadows **
Faction = Erana's Order
Unit Type = Dark Templar**
Background - Pre Brood War
Opheilm is one of the young Dark Templars that was with Zeratul when the latter first met with Tassadar. Initially not trusting the Khalai Protoss, Opheilm was against Zeratul aiding Tassadar as he carries a huge resentment against the Conclave. After witnessing Tassadar's devotion to the future of the Protoss, and his views about both light and dark, Opheilm gradually grew to respect Tassadar as a great leader and as someone who is able to bring the gap between the 2 sides. However, this all changed when Aldaris made the announcement that Tassadar was a traitor and has no longer any say in the Conclave.
Resentment against the Conclave began to fill Opheilm again as he believes that the Conclave were stuck on old ideals that will just lead to their downfall. Regardless, he still greatly respects Tassadar as an individual and continues to serve him. His experiences with Tassadar, Raynor and Fenix has convinced him that both of their races can work together for the greater good.
However, everything changed for him when during the final battle of the overmind, whereby, Tassadar sacrificed himself to destroy the overmind. Not understanding fully why Tassadar would willingly sacrifice himself for these foolish Protoss, Opheilm's resentment for the Conslave grew into hatred as he believes that it shouldn't have been Tassadar that died that day.
Background - Brood War
While aiding the Protoss in the escape to Shakuras, before the Warp Gate was shut down, Opheilm was knocked unconscious by the Zerg, not before managing to kill his attacker. When he woke up, he found himself at Shakuras, battered and injured. While the Dark Templar and protoss refugees were assaulting the Zerg on Shakuras, Opheilm chose to run away from it all. Disillusioned and weary from conflict, he boarded his shuttle and went into cold sleep, drifting into the sea of stars...
Unknown to him, while drifting aimlessly, his shuttle has been sucked into a random wormhole that connects the Koprulu sector to the Eurim sector. Opheilm just continued to be in cold sleep, as though this is what he wants.
Centuries after WoL
The shuttle continued drifting until it was too close to the Planet Khasan and was sucked into it due to its gravitional pull and in part, the poor maintenance of the shuttle. This woke Opheilm up from his slumber. Realizing that he was surrounded by a megalopolis of Protoss settlements, he went ahead and made contact with them, and since he was a Dark Templar, he was given a scouting position in the army. He soon came to understand that The Ancestral Imperium of Protoss is exactly the same as the Protoss Conclave led by the Khalai. This brought back up painful memories and once again, stirred up ambivalent feelings of hatred and loss within him.
It was then he met the Praetor Erana whom reminded him very much of Tassadar. It was through Erana that he managed to find a source of peace in this sector hostile to him just because of his caste. He found Erana's views of racial segregation and the Dark Templar to be very similiar to Tassadar and vowed his alligence to Erana - the same way that Zeratul had once sworn to help Tassadar. Since then, Opheilm has been acting as a slient guardian to Erana, overseeing everything that goes around Erana.
Not too long later, the Zerg invaded and Opheilm proved himself as a Master scout during the war, the battles and experiences that he faced during his time at the Koprulu sector gave him much exposure to the Zerg and their tactics. His timely and accurate reports saved the lives of countless of Protoss and even at times, allowed them to turn the tide of battle, earning him the nickname "Shadow"
Despite his efforts, the overwhelming concentrated numbers of the Zerg still proved to be too formidable against the divided unity of the Protoss. It was then that Praetor Erana managed to get all the different tribes of Protoss and even the Terrans to work together against their common enemy. This brought back memories of the alliance between Zeratul, Tassadar and Raynor. In Praetor Erana, Opheilm saw Tassadar. He envisioned himself as Zeratul and the Terran as Raynor's Raiders. Except that this time, "Tassadar" didn't die after the war.
After the Battle Of Arken
Despite being a Dark Templar, Opheilm was given the rank of Praetor after the war for his heroic exploits. However, on the day where he was awarded Praetor, The Imperium arrested Erana and stripped the rank of Praetor away from Erana. It dawned on him that he was awarded Praetor to fill in the gap in the conclave that Erana once held.
Opheilm realized that being a Praetor, he would have a say regarding racial segregation and other conservative laws that the regime has and he would be able to carry on Erana's views, but he may very well lose a close friend whom he sworn to protect. Against his better judgement, he chose to stay on as a Praetor. Despite being made Praetor and openly voicing out his views, the Imperium's disdain and ostracize against Dark Templar and the Nerazim hasn't changed and slowly, he became disillusioned again. It was at this time he thought of what Zeratul would have done, and he fell to his knees in remorse and mortification.
Erana's Order
During this time, he left his Praetor position and joined Erana's Order, for a chance of redemption. There, he found the solace that he needed and has always dreamed of. There wasn't any Racial Segregation, both light and dark fought for the same cause. Although he initial faced some disapproval from members as he chose to become a Praetor instead of rescuing Erana that day, his abilities and judgement has earned the respect of everyone in the order. His sole motivation for going on now is Erana, whom he sees as a figure of Tassadar. He has since taken on a new oath, and vowed Erana will not die while he is still holds breath.
Personality
Opheilm likes to work alone or work with a selected few people that he trusts. Years of resentment and hatred has taken a toll on his mental state, leading him to be cynical towards others. Although it takes long to earn Opheilm's trust, once its earned, it will not be broken easily. After the events of Tassadar, He disdains taking away the life of both Protoss and Terran, as he has witnessed the mutual cooperation between both sides, however that does not go for Zerg. He fights the Zerg with a fevour unlike any other, and will stop at nothing to kill these abominations.
Attributes
Heroic - Light - Psionic
Health(Shield) 375(200) 23
Energy 260 6
Mov Speed 5.5 32
Armor 2 6
Sight 14 21
DPS 40 27
Range 0.1 0
AoE(area) 0 0
Abilities 5 50
Total: 161
Weapon: Olden Warp Blades
Damage 40, cooldown 1 Sec
Abilities
Blink -
Energy - Nil,
Cooldown: 10 seconds
Studying from his mentor, Zeratul, Opheilm is able to mimic his blink ability to 100% efficiency.
Twilight -
Energy - 0.9 per second
Advanced cloaking techniques enable Opheilm to move around without the "cloak blimp" being seen at the map
Expel -
Energy - 75
Using Psionic techinques, Opheilm is able to push a group of units back to range 6 from Opheilm. This ability shoots out as an AoE cone that extends from Opheilm Massive units are not affected. Cannot affect structures, but air units are effected. No damage is dealt.
Surreal Hallucination -
Energy - 50 (Per Illusion)\ Picking up a few tricks from Tassadar, Opheilm is able to create 1 hallucination of himself instantly. These hallucinations differ in the fact that they possesses the same intelligence and will as Opheilm and lasts twice as longer. These hallucinations are used as more of a messenger then to actually distract enemies
Assassinate -
Energy - 100
Every Dark Templar is trained in the art of assassination. Opheilm is no different. Deals 225(+75 to massive) damage to a single target at melee range. However, Opheilm must not be revealed by any detectors while using this skill.
Ship (Amadeus) Carrier
Weapons 3 3
Armor 3 3
Manueverability 4 16
Security 3 9
Cargo 1 1
Speed 5 25
Total 69
Tech
Observer tech 8
Scout Tech 24
Observer 10 1
Scout 20 6
Total 273.
Ship (Amagumo, Heaven's Cloud) Scout
\Heroic - Light - Mechanical
Health(Shield) 150(125) 11
Energy 200 0
Mov Speed 3 8
Armor 0 0
Sight 8(14 when piloted by Opheilm) 0
DPS 10 7
Range 0.1 0
AoE(area) 0 0
Abilities 2 5
Total: 31
Weapon: Obsolete Phase cannons Damage 10, Cooldown 1 second.
Abilities
Heaven's Web Energy - 75 Cooldown: 10 seconds
Using the technology from the corsairs, Amagumo is able to launch a disruption web which disables structure type units from attacking for 20 seconds. Radius of 3. Range of 9 (MTs have range 8 when upgraded)
Supersonic Energy - 25
Cooldown: 30 Seconds
Charges : 5
Turns all thrusters of Amagumo to 150% power. Dashes the Amagumo for 10 Range in the timeframe of 1 second. However, this ability has 5 charges in which 1 will be used each time. Replenishing of charges can only be done either through repairs, or by docking at a stargate.