SC2Mapster

This is for missions 1-2 I'll update once I hit 3.

Text issues:

• The opening line seems a bit weird:
  "before he and I die, Amon will fall at our feet." 
• "kappa, can I you" 
• You can have "find super zealot" and "start of mission" dialogue overlap (mission 3)

Gameplay issues:

• No way to decloak (or make it clear you can't decloak)
• It says melee units have shadow charge, but nothing on the command bar for that (mission 1)
• Building warpins look weird
• can't select warping in cannon
• Mission 1 doesn't update when you destroy a "position"
• there's an unpowered "dark portal" in the right side of the base on mission 2
• There's no setting up of forward bases in mission 2
• Can't get to mission 3 by completing mission 2
• Reconstruction will still be grey on super zealots after research (unless it's cooling down)
• Some units don't get upgrades
• You can place another nexus (on the higher ground) to get around the lose condition
• you get 150 minerals on a super zealot destruction
• You can reresearch the "marine" enable.

I don't like the reliance you have on early game vespene

My opinions on the missions:

1. It's a mission.

2. You're too reliant on waiting for your allies to attack with you.  Broodlords are a real pain to fight, especially earlygame.  Brutalisk is almost worthless at the point you find him and takes too long to kill.

3. Too much time between attacks, especially lategame.  Despite the mission not ending if you lose your hero unit he's just too good to lose.  Running out of minerals just past the halfway mark.

By "reliant on early game vespene", I mean that you have to get a refinery real early to get supply and units.

The screenshots looks very promising.

So this is before Amon rise to power.

Should be interesting to see your take on the subject.

Best of luck to your campaign!

More gameplay stuff:

• Mission 1:
  • Zealots don't get a image update when they get a weapon upgrade
  • While zealots do get weapon ups, the weapon image doesn't change
  • Dragoons don't get upgrades
  • No units get shield/armor upgrades (except probes)
  • Dragoons still have barrier
  • The pylons u start with don't get shield upgrades
  • You should probably give the brutalisk detection so you can't snipe it with cloaked units
• Mission 2:
  • All dark portals are unpowered (you've made it worse)
  • Suggestion: enemy attack wave minimap ping.  Zerg (especially mutalisks) move faster than you so you're taking dmg while retreating to ally fortifications
  • Mission is way more interesting when you solopush defenses then retreat back to allies for attack waves
  • Norah'fur's energy doesn't regen
• Mission 3:
  • You can use the base structures before you reach the base
  • Super zealots will move randomly due to the trigger "place in front of army" or something