I am looking for creative people whom masters english that can help me with the story elements of my campaign. English is not my first language, and quite frankly I write terrible english.
I have not made much thought or effort into the story in my campaign, but I realise that it is quite a vital part of any project. I would like to recieve feedback on my story and on my awkwardly constructed sentences, and if you would like to help me write a better story I would be very thankful.
So I am seeking people to help me with the following two issues.
1. A person to proof-read my dialogue and seek out spelling errors and awkward sentences.
2. A person to contribute to the story. You might come up with ideas on how to continue the story, or to rephrase or rewrite the story in my current missions.
I have uploaded a document with most of the text I have written in the campaign. If anyone would like to take this task I would be very happy.
I'm eagerly up for it, I have just written a +25 page and 10 mission script on my own time for my own campaign (see the first post-alpha mission in Arcade as "Star of Treznat: Clean Slate - Mission 1" [search a key word like "clean slate"] and the website for it, www.staroftreznat.weebly.com)
I will be happy to edit, add one more mission which will be using my story continuation, and then describe my idea of how to effectively continue the story. If you wish to read my script, shoot me a PM.
Thank you, I'll PM you with your edited script and you can tell me if you like it.