The camera quality is quite bad (which you probly know). And the backround noice is so loud...If that was ment to be scary, it wasnt. I think it would require more special effects, a bit better acting. Ill give you that the "growl" part was sort of cool, but other than that it weird...
This felt like one of those "fake real ghost appears IRL videos"
As far as your script goes. Its quite hard to tell if its any good, atleast the video presentation is not. You need to make it look cooler instead of those random text appearing breaking the mood further.
I have posted my film idea on these forums, check it out, have a read. then watch this.
Tell me what you think guys!
(Sorry about the quality, youtube screwed it up.)
Well what can I say.
The camera quality is quite bad (which you probly know). And the backround noice is so loud...If that was ment to be scary, it wasnt. I think it would require more special effects, a bit better acting. Ill give you that the "growl" part was sort of cool, but other than that it weird...
This felt like one of those "fake real ghost appears IRL videos"
As far as your script goes. Its quite hard to tell if its any good, atleast the video presentation is not. You need to make it look cooler instead of those random text appearing breaking the mood further.
As i said it was a test, i will re-upload it in High Def once i figure out how to stop the distortion you can see in the video.
Bump...