Pretty good, few things though, not like I could have gotten as far as you already did though. The voice acting is kinda ok, it needs work though. For example the prisoner zealot annoyed me with his slightly western voice and stuff. Why is Rory Swan a Russian? Also the guy on the bridge is obviously a civilian model. The War Pig character's voice also needs a bit of tweaking. Actually, my favorite voice was the Zeratul dude. Zealots aren't dumb as well, they are highly attuned psionic warriors. My best advice? Tune the silly down a bit and add a bit more action. The zerg looked too easy to kill.
thank you very much
however i don't really understand what you mean about some things.
like its not based on the starcraft storyline thats not Rory swann thats lieutenant Sprocket and why does it matter if that guy on the bridge is a civilian model, in my show he works on the ship! i picked models that i liked the look of to play the characters i wanted to portray, its not supposed to be based on the starcraft story or i would have made it based on it with those characters. im not going to limit myself to what it is in the game cause thats not what this shows about.
and yeah the warpig may need tuning.. but thats my voice and i cant change the way i sound, im not hiring professional actors or anything. its just me and a few friends
thanks for ur sugestions tho i will try to work on my voice to make it better
Some constructive feedback for Episode 2 and above:
You need to mix the sound better, It's difficult to hear what the characters are saying a lot of the time. Music should be a bit quieter, and you should tone down the voice effects on some of the characters, their speech is extremely distorted at points. Everything in the video should be able to be heard clearly, that's when you know you've done a good job mixing it.