SC2Mapster

Just played through the whole thing and it's a great map!

I'll give you some feedback on a couple of things.

• First off is the legendary localization error, I run the enGB version of the game and all the strings (dialogue and objectives) show up as Param/Value/E09218EI2 so I didn't understand anything from the story. You really have to make this a habit, after updating a map you need to localize it again; gotta love this system! No hard feelings though, everyone forgets this at times.

Excuse me if some of the points sound stupid and should be explained in the story once it's localized.

• The terrain in the start up until the base is beautifully done, the temple looks rather dull.
• The passage were a bit narrow, but it didn't make the game frustrating.
• The reinforcements you get once the first main base is destroyed spawn all the way back, it might be better to let them spawn closer to the destroyed base and automatically let them fly to the middle of it; saves some waiting time.
• The terrain around the base is pretty narrow as well, I didn't have enough space to make a fully functional base and my Probes would get stuck behind doodads that are scattered around it quite a lot.

• Why does the base have high yield minerals and on top of that 4 high yield geysers? That's an awful big bonus you give the player there. It was quite easy to defend the base with the units already under my control. I just went straight for Carriers + Mothership and wiped the whole map with little effort.

My suggestion is to make more expansion sites guarded by the Terran that you have to conquer in order to get more resources, that makes it more of a challenge.

• I can only guess the story, but it felt pretty good and even without the texts it was clear to me what I had to do, up to when I cleared all the libraries. I tried bringing that Dark Templar to the beacons, nothing happened so I tried Probes, still nothing. I couldn't figure it out, but I assume that is clear to me once I can read the dialogue.

• The AI was actually pretty good, my compliments. Though it would be more of a challenge if the marines didn't come one by one.

• You get bonus points for the Thorship, I laughed when I saw that :D

All in all, a pretty good map! Keep it up!