SC2Mapster

you need more platform stuff! Hole! no flat terrain please! and add remove everything blocking the sight, it break fun when you are at 10 life and an hydra drop from it or at least make them smaller. Example remove the one at 1:59 and make it one as small as 1:25. And remove unsued unit like the 2:15 thor! seeing a thor there would actually make me try to reach it for an hours at least.

Also, move the boss bar you are using for the marine right to the life dialog, the 2 behing the much down possible cause you are hiding the marine just there!

Last thing, i know your boss isn't complete, but he should be making eggs everywhere, not at 3 single locations, make it lunch eggs randomly on like 10 points or more! + remove the tool tips of the rock at 4:54.

Beside that, you game is awesome! i love the muta at 5:04, it's crazy xD Adding a voice for every dialog is interesting, but they aren't saying the stuff written down, that look dumb :O would you make the voice yourself? xD

Anyways, 3/5 You got lot of work to do, but you already know that right? Good luck and have fun making the map :)

Mike

looks great! when are you posting a beta?

thank you^^

promising

Loks awesome !

Really nice work, cant wait to test it out.

Hit Boxes seem to be too big, any chance changing it? And the boss looks kinda booring, make him throw banelings at your or something :)

I like the name :) and pics looks ok

Good luck on the project