SC2Mapster

I quit with in like 5 minutes. It's way too tough, you just massed units instead of having Smart A.I. Plus, the beginning is annoying because two banelings just blow everyone up before I can repair.

I didn't see the call reinforcements button at first. In fact, I killed the zerg base before wondering what to do and allying with the protoss. At this point the neutral protoss task force up north had already moved to the southern base on their own, and some kind of invisible blocker had appeared at hte choke point leading to the protoss half of the map. I'm kinda mystified about the blocker cause I had already moved a significant number of troops south to attack the dominion but could not move more in except reavers. Sadly, an infinite number of reavers cannot kill 3 seige tanks next to each other and far from ledges.

Have you even tested your own map here? Its pretty impossible without some kind of editing.

You might want to cut the player some slack at the start when zerglings + 2 banelings rush in. I got killed :P

Also, it's kind of weird that your primary objective is to kill the pylons supporting the forcefields, while it results in you going into war with them.

Lastly, what protoss would build 20 cannons supported by 2 pylons? Never 20 cannons, maybe 4.

2nd lastly, you need to remove the liftoff icons from the command card if buildings can't lift off...

Enjoyable map, but there's a couple issues.

The Protoss bunch up their forces should you choose to ally with them; they become road blocks for your troops on your way to the Dominion's base. I had lots of troops getting stuck in their unit balls. Those choke points are fiercely narrow, by the way. :P

Protoss Ball Blocks Pathing. News at 9.

Second, there is WAY too much money on the map, especially for the Zerg expo, lol. I let myself mine everything out and came out with roughly 150k minerals. Whoa. Gas is looking good at least, but could be more scarce.

150k Minerals? Hell Yeah.

You start off the player with very small amount of resources in the starting town but the Zerg expo has SO much it doesn't even matter anymore. The mission wasn't challenging anymore after that point. :/ Definitely should dramatically lower the available resources for all towns without totally breaking it.

Depending on the type of experience you're trying to deliver, you seem to want to make the campaign difficult but the latter half of this scenario wasn't so.

One last thing, regarding the branching paths in the scenario. I'm going to assume you haven't finished working out all the triggers yet but the only way to win, whether you allied with the Protoss or the Dominion, was to destroy the Protoss shield generators. I ended up destroying everything on the map, rendering the prior choice totally irrelevant. If this were a branching scenario, there should be two ways to complete it (i.e. victory trigger when the Dominion has been defeated if you allied with the Protoss).

Hope this feedback helps.

Edit: Fixed image tags.

Edit 2: I forgot to mention another problem. The Dominion attack waves weren't... well, attacking. They would just simply "move" into my troops. If you're setting up these waves manually (haven't looked at the map triggers yet) then you should set their troops to "Attack" to a region. This will do an effective attack-move command. No screenshot of this happening, though. Sorry.

Nice map. I think reapers are semi-useless on this map. At least make the cliffs traversable by reapers so they're sorta useful.

I incurred the wrath of the protoss before reading your changelog. I got destroyed. ^^

Its not bad. But IMO its too linear. Would be more fun if there was more use for reapers on the map, and more choke points for the marauder. IE the choke point works for you on defence, but against you on offence. Perhaps allow reapers to get around some way, perhaps having to clear it, to support your marauders and flank. It would be more fun if there were alternate ways to go, rather then just marauder spam + push.